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Hi liz
I wrote your essay
And I realised that how much mistakes that I made in the past, now I will try to make ideas for essay. But I need your help to improve me. Because I have 1 month for my IELTS test.
Thank you
Yusuf

This essay is a companion to my separate essay on and my essay on.

Hoaxes commonly show the following common characteristics:

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At approximately 8:48 a.m. on the morning of September 11, 2001, the first pictures of the burning World Trade Center were broadcast on live television. The news anchors, reporters, and viewers had little idea what had happened in lower Manhattan, but there were some people who did know. By that time, the Federal Aviation Administration (FAA), the North American Aerospace Defense Command (NORAD), the National Military Command Center, the Pentagon, the White House, the Secret Service, and Canada’s Strategic Command all knew that three commercial airplanes had been hijacked. They knew that one plane had been flown deliberately into the World Trade Center’s North Tower; a second plane was wildly off course and also heading toward Manhattan; and a third plane had abruptly turned around over Ohio and was flying back toward Washington, DC.

Sometimes the message contains long, detailed instructions for removing the alleged virus.

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Vocab and grammar range are only part of the scoring. Accuracy, punctuation and spelling are also vital. You are marked on main points but you are also marked on your method of developing them, linking them, presenting a clear position etc. There is much more involved in getting band 7:

It can be spread through the existing e-mail systems of the InterNet.

hello mam can you please give mei scores for this task which is about the effects on enviroment by individual and social activities and how to overcome these.

The following text is from the Anti-Virus website:

Opinion Essays are about presenting a clear position and explaining it. You can see my clear opinion: “in my opinion, while I believe that such sites are mainly beneficial to the individual, I agree that they have had a damaging effect on local communities.”. I divide the individual and society – one is positive and the other is negative. It is a clear opinion.

Putting long, detailed instructions into an e-mail is a symptom of a hoax.

Bush Is Briefed as the Hijackings Begin

social media including (face book and whats up) have a many cons result for each part of community. In my opinion and through my reading of this issue i strongly disagree and i want change this idea . However, social proggrame maybe lead to lose our brain function.

Alternatively, the hoax might mention the name of a major anti-virus software vendor.

Once a Computer is infected, one of several things can happen.

We don’t use “cons” in formal writing. Also “cons result” is not a compound noun. To get a good score you will need to reduce your grammar and vocabulary errors which are currently at band 5.

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It could save them a lot of time and money.

I don’t see a difference between this essay (opinion essay) , looking at both body paragraphs, and a discussion/opinion essay. Both include first advantages and then drawback ???