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Owing to the problems which a growing population of overweight people cause for the health care system, some people think that the key to solving these issues is to have more sport and exercise in schools. In my opinion, I completely agree that this is the best way to tackle the issue of deteriorating public health in relation to weight.

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Your experience can include any event that you were involved in, in your life. It could be related to your education. Personal life or work experience. What affect that event had on you that you can mention?

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Anw, I mean no disrespect to you but eventhough this sample has a clear logic and good supported sentences, I Feel like this is not a band 9 essay, as there should be more complex sentences and ideas should be more fully supported. Am I wrong? Pls let me know.

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I see, maybe I deconstructed your sample in the wrong way. Once again, thanks for replying

Dear can we use obesity for overweight ?

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The word obesity is not the same as overweight. Obesity is a medical problem and very extreme.

can’t we discuss like agree and dis agree and concluded them at once

The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Hii Madam, Ma’m kindly provide me some 9 band essays or essays written by you…

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I’ve only made three so far. I hope to make more later next year and at present I’m writing an ideas book for writing task 2 which should be ready in a couple of months 🙂