from "Integration Turns 40" by Juan Williams in , April/May, 1994.

The order of items above is the best order to present each part of the introduction: get the reader's attention, move toward the thesis statement, and then present the thesis statement. The thesis statement usually is most effective as just one sentence at the end of the introduction, so you should avoid presenting the thesis statement as the first sentence of the introduction and should avoid presenting the thesis statement in more than one sentence. (Information about thesis statements is presented on Web page.)

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i would say add a few more lines to the intro because it is a little short. i would say add a few facts and about teen pregnancy and then go into your reasons

…cite experts who agree with you

By this time they may have done so much work on the body of the essay that they just want to finish the essay off as quickly as possible and so they write a rushed and badly written conclusion.

You MUST choose one side or the other when you write an argument paper!

Helping students excel in education

This would surround the students with positive energy and will definitely help them to overcome their bullying attitude. Rich or poor, high class or low class every child is same and equal and their innocence must not be harmed by substandard and unsatisfactory attitude. Lastly , I want to say that each of us is a book to be written, either good or bad , worst or best and, if written, defines a person’s personality i.e., a person’s persona is by the people, the nature, the positive or the negative energy surrounding him. Good the surroundings are, best a person is.

By addressing the opposition you achieve the following goals:

Stories are one way of catching people’s attention, particularly stories that are relatable and true. For example, if one is to write an essay regarding widespread hunger in Africa, one might want to start the essay by letting the readers feel like they are experiencing firsthand extreme hunger.

Quotes - Direct quotes from leading experts that support your position are invaluable.

…use strictly moral or religious claims as support for your argument

These patterns can give a "lift" to your writing. Practicethem. Try using two or three different patternsfor your introductory paragraph and see which introductoryparagraph is best; it's often a delicate matter of tone and of knowing who your audience is. Do not forget, though, that your introductoryparagraph should also include a thesis statement to let your readerknow what your topic is and what you are going to say about thattopic.

…use weak qualifiers like “I believe,” “I feel,” or “I think”—just tell us!

You should present any new arguments in your conclusion.

Both formal and informal sanctions may be introduced to help eliminate teenage bullying. Some of the common informal social controls include ridicule, criticism, and shame. These sanctions can help teenage bullying because teenage bullying is a form of deviant behavior.

Examples - Examples enhance your meaning and make your ideas concrete. They are the proof.

…address the opposing side’s argument and refute their claims

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