but I have went to a SSTC Tutor for this essay as well.
This would help find mistakes and "awkward" sentences.
2) Welcome to the U.C.C.A - if you have been living under a rock for the last few years you need to understand that the U.S.A. is no more.
It has been replaced by the United Corperations and Churches of America.
The real product is the "stock" and the true customer is the "stock holder" -- get over it.
And for the "churches", just look at what the CongressCritters passed today Tue 25 Jul 2006, it all has its roots in the "religious right" for the purpose of salvaging the November Elections.
Reason for this is because there was some "awkward" sentences.
Automatic Updates appear to be a necessary evil. Witness the discussion about creation of white worms that go out and patch all unpatched systems when a black worm begins circulating. Insecurity of other computers on the Internet can only affect me through a 0-day attack, through a DOS, or by sending SPAM. ISPs should be required to quarantine computers within their network boundaries participating in a DOS. There are any number of reasonably effective ways of reducing SPAM below a nuisance threshold. Leaving only the 0-day attack, which by definition has no Automatic Update to apply. The percieved necessary evil only exists because the model used for Internet security is designed to make corporations money rather than to provide security. Only when those 'providers' of security services become legally liable will change occur.